[ 140318 ] Learning How to Compose Short Paragraph

140318. Learning How to Compose Short Paragraph

On last Tuesday, I learned how to compose short paragraph,

which was the next class of learning how to make a short sentence.  

It was quite easier than the class before, because I learned about this several times before

in English class of middle school and high school.

By using Ginger software, I could check some errors in my paragraph and edit my paragraph.

It was interesting that I could write and revise my essay at the same time.

(Because Ginger is a kind of automatic feedback of my essay.)

Also,  by using quizlet, I could review vocabularies related to the chapter I learn.

This sentences below is what I wrote in English Composition class,

(about topic sentences and supporting details.)

(Topic Sentence) : An iPad mini is portable, efficient and strong

(Supporting Details)

- Explanation : An iPad mini is lighter than any other devices that Apple has made.
- Description : An iPad mini is 7.9 inches wide pad with natural-like curved aluminum on the back.

- Reason : As iPad mini is smaller than Galaxy  tab, it is easy to carry and handle it with only one hand.

- Facts : The price of iPad mini is $650; however, the price of iPad is $770.

2014.03.20 posted by. Hansol Jang